tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3647218177948670695.post3114010767491084258..comments2023-11-05T06:50:20.570-05:00Comments on Picture Book Ninja!: A Ten Critique Week!Corey Schwartzhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06683944890522588405noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3647218177948670695.post-84858330264460331262009-03-31T19:34:00.000-04:002009-03-31T19:34:00.000-04:00Phew!!!! And, wonderful advice, by the way!!!Phew!!!! And, wonderful advice, by the way!!!Kelly H-Yhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07324529762031928328noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3647218177948670695.post-73409881337451878482009-03-31T11:41:00.000-04:002009-03-31T11:41:00.000-04:00My mother swears by 123 Magic! I just bought it f...My mother swears by 123 Magic! I just bought it for my daughter's teacher :-) (cuz she can't handle the class - er I should say she couldn't... now she can :-)Katie Andersonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08067504634291164972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3647218177948670695.post-15046982315861700442009-03-29T15:58:00.000-04:002009-03-29T15:58:00.000-04:00I love the echo. I always try to make my stories c...I love the echo. I always try to make my stories come full circle. I just started rewriting one of my PB manuscripts to take better advantage of this. But I'm rewriting the beginning to match the ending instead of the other way around.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3647218177948670695.post-27208897930345049762009-03-29T10:28:00.000-04:002009-03-29T10:28:00.000-04:00I like the idea of an echo. Now I have some PB man...I like the idea of an echo. Now I have some PB manuscripts to look over. Thanks Corey!Rebecca Gomezhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06842712720778708758noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3647218177948670695.post-8150891103408923472009-03-28T17:02:00.000-04:002009-03-28T17:02:00.000-04:00Oh, so glad I could be of help!Oh, so glad I could be of help!Corey Schwartzhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03883689227283545602noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3647218177948670695.post-72547183990147913932009-03-28T14:07:00.000-04:002009-03-28T14:07:00.000-04:00Thank you so much for this post! Your message real...Thank you so much for this post! Your message really hit home with me, because I've been trying to write PB and young adult novels and I'm finding that I think my style is better directed at the young adult age. There are challenges with both, but the three things you listed are the top ones for me with PBs.Khttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14469312477524652967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3647218177948670695.post-55962504135754748302009-03-28T10:59:00.000-04:002009-03-28T10:59:00.000-04:00Very good tips! Thanks!Very good tips! Thanks!PurpleCloverhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07933014134696608557noreply@blogger.com