I've been kind of quiet lately in the blogosphere. Why is that?
Is it because (A) I have realized that I blog to the detriment of my writing and have decided to focus my efforts on manuscripts this month instead?
Is it because (B) my Scramble habit has returned (but I've been too embarrassed to admit it?)
Is it because (C) I have a secret and I'm scared if I blog, it will slip out, the same way I accidentally told my college roommate who her Secret Santa was?
If you guess D, all of the above, you'd be correct.
There are some things going on that I can't talk about, but there are plenty of things I can talk about. So, I will choose a safe topic. Writing tips. When my five year old blogs, she dictates and I type. Every few words, she says, "Read me what I have so far." This cracks me up. She's only in kindergarten, but she already knows that her words have to "sound good."
ME: You have "I asked my mommy to sign me up for gymnastics because I thought it would be really fun. But then I discovered that some moves hurt me and I didn't like class. One day I came and I started to cry. I wanted to go home. A nice assistant named Alex helped me out, and then I discovered something new. Class could be really fun if I just give it a chance!"
JORDAN: I said discovered too many times. Change the second one to noticed.
What's interesting is that Jordan can read perfectly well by herself. But she doesn't feel she can adequately "listen" while she is reading. She needs me to read it so she can focus completely on how her words sound.
So, here is my tip. Ask someone else to read your work aloud.
Do they stumble or trip anywhere. Are there words you repeated by accident. Is your dialogue natural? Do your transitions flow?
You may discover something you hadn't noticed before! :)
33 comments:
Your five year old blogs! I'm so impressed!
I was reading my work aloud last night with my hubby perched beside me. Every few scenes I would ask, "how's that?"
Awesome advice! And some I use very often. It works!!
Excellent advice from a kindergartener. Priceless.
And I can't wait to hear your secret! I like sekrits.
From the mouths of babes...
That's too cute. Sounds like the apple didn't fall far from the tree there.
Thanks for the tip!
well... can I say this? Jordan is brilliant. And way precocious. And pretty darn smart.
Oh boy, Corey! You have a handful! :0) A sweet and wonderful handful, but she'll be outsmarting you before you know it. LOL
I love her blog and she is a natural born writer. Just like her momma. One day I'll see her name on the cover of a book and say, "Hey! I knew her when..."
Jordan makes me nervous. I hope she doesn't read my blog. I am sure she'll find errors.
Very cute!
She is one smart cookie. I mean, recognizing that she repeats words, determining a synonym, writing blogs? I'm impressed!
She sounds so stinking cute.
Fantastic advice! What a smartie pants!
you can say you have a secret you big tease :)
Okay, I"m DISCOVERING that you have a secret. Has anyone else NOTICED??
Jordan is dreamy--sooooo smart!!!
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Could you send Jordan over to listen to my manuscript, please?
And no fair leaking that there's a secret you can't tell!
I love secrets...you can email me yours. I promise not to tell anyone. :)
My first critique is done by my 13 year old. I thought that was impressive, but wow Jordan is awesome! Future agent or editor in training....
Keep that critique partner!
I'm so curious about C...the suspense is killing me. :)
Great advice. Thanks, Jordan.
From the mouths of babes...great tip!
Great tip, Corey! And Jordan is such a doll! :-)
Great tip!
But I'm looking forward to hearing the secret soon :D
ACK!
I wanna know your secret!!! :)
Genius.
And I wanna know too.
Awesome advice! Oh, and now I'm DYING to know your secret. You're killing me.
Corey - Jordan sounds like a writer in training! She is certainly getting a head start and isn't that wonderful. Plus, your advice is fantastic. It does sound different spoken. Hope everything else turns out well!
I answered "D"!! Your little one sounds so cute.
I'm also feeling absent from blogs, but with lots of good reasons (I think!) too :)
Are you sure she's FIVE?!?!? I think you're lying! What a smartie pants.
And, uh, yeah. No fair about dropping the secret bomb and leaving.
Well, to be honest, she is almost six! Her birthday is in March. But she is only in kindergarten. (and I felt silly saying she is 5 and 5/6 :)
Your daughter is a budding author! Wow, I'm so impressed. Can't wait to hear your good news!
Spill it! Spill it! Spill it!
Seriously, you've had lots of secrets these past few months....
Spill!
It's amazing what kids can come up with on their own. What a smart girl! Great tip! Thanks for sharing!
Yes. My book club read one of my short stories and because someone forgot their glasses it was read out loud. Sounds totally different when it's not in my head. It's something I try to do all the time now. Especially with dialog.
But I was over 40 when I had this stroke of genius. That brilliant, brilliant kid!
What a smart little 5-year-old!
I love the read aloud trick. I make my husband read my manuscript back to me when I really get stuck.
I try reading my work aloud too. It's not easy because I'm rarely in a place where people won't think I'm crazy if I do so!
I love the bit about listening to someone read your work out loud, and as for the 5yr old blogging... there's an idea!
So true! Except I find it hard to listen outside of editor mode. I hear all the mistakes and want to fix them...immediately.
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