Oh, maybe I shouldn't have posted that snippet. It's not that you all weren't supportive. Quite the opposite! People said such nice things about the newer version of that PIGS stanza that now I am second-guessing my decision to replace it.
I even went to so far as to email Casey and ask her if my newest version was better, and she said, I actually prefer the one with "succulent swine."
When did I start writing by committee? (My husband always warns me against doing exactly that!)
Why can't I decide for myself? Why do I feel like polling each and every one of my followers? Maybe because I am so used to writing with Becky? Whenever I am on the fence, she always has a strong opinion, so that settles it.
Maybe I have just revised this story for so long that I have lost perspective? Has that ever happened to you?